题目：The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题思路：题干中的control 表控制，程度较轻。结合现实看，该题适合完全赞同。

赞同理由1：电视和电影中的暴力情节会让孩子模仿，所以政府应该控制，从而降低由孩子模仿导致的犯罪
 

赞同理由2：电视和电影中的暴力情节会导致社会中有暴力倾向的变态者模仿，所以政府该控制，从而降低由他们模仿导致的犯罪。

高分范文——

    It is argued that TV programs and movies with violent content must be censored before being aired so that copycat violent crimes will be reduced. I completely agree with this view.

    First of all, violent criminal activities and horrendous acts related to teenagers will be reduced if restrictions are placed on violence in the media. Teenagers are not mature enough and what they see is usually what they learn. There is a risk that significant exposure to media violence will desensitize children to violence and give them a message that violent activities are appropriate. This to a certain extent explains the soaring number of knife and gun crimes involving juveniles over the past 10 years. As such, strict censorship in place will decrease the number of serious violent crimes committed by youth.

    Moreover, violence portrayed in the media should be restricted as it has turned out to be an inspiration for many adults to commit copycat crimes. Violent plots are accessible to all people including psychopaths, who completely lack empathy. Such information may inspire these people to take violent acts and make them real. For example, Heath Ledger's portrayal of the Joker in The Dark Knight is so iconic and popular that many violent crimes have been associated with this cinematic villain. Thus, a certain amount of control from the government is necessary in order to eliminate this type of crime.

    In conclusion, I strongly believe that exposure to violence does make people more aggressive and violent. The government should step in and impose greater control over such information in films and on TV.

这篇范文不算长，却在考官中备受好评，获得了七分的高分。由此我们可以得知：写作文想拿高分并不一定需要长篇大论，反而精炼的语言和顺畅的逻辑会更让考官耳目一新，获得更高的分数！

 

 

 

 

雅思常见写作素材

1、环境保护（Environment Protection）

全球变暖（Global Warming）：carbon emissions, greenhouse gases, climate change, fossil fuels, renewable energy, sustainable development

水资源短缺（Water Scarcity）：water conservation, desalination, sustainable water management, pollution control

保护濒危物种（Endangered Species Protection）：biodiversity, habitat loss, conservation efforts, wildlife preservation

2、教育（Education）

在线教育（Online Education）：distance learning, e-learning platforms, digital literacy, accessibility, self-discipline

学术压力（Academic Pressure）：mental health, exam-oriented education, holistic development, personal growth, extracurricular activities

学习方式（Learning Styles）：kinesthetic, auditory, visual, personalized learning, hands-on experience

3、科技与社会（Technology and Society）

人工智能（Artificial Intelligence）：machine learning, automation, ethical concerns, job displacement, innovation

社交媒体的影响（Impact of Social Media）：cyberbullying, digital footprint, privacy concerns, echo chambers, social influence

无人驾驶技术（Self-Driving Technology）：autonomous vehicles, road safety, technological advancements, ethical dilemmas, infrastructure

4、健康（Health）

健康生活方式（Healthy Lifestyle）：balanced diet, regular exercise, mental well-being, preventive healthcare, sedentary lifestyle

精神健康（Mental Health）：stress management, therapy, work-life balance, social support, mindfulness

公共卫生（Public Health）：vaccination, healthcare accessibility, disease prevention, healthcare funding, hygiene practices

5、全球化（Globalization）

文化融合（Cultural Integration）：cultural diversity, multiculturalism, global citizenship, loss of cultural identity, international cooperation

经济全球化（Economic Globalization）：trade agreements, foreign investment, outsourcing, economic interdependence, income inequality

国际旅游（International Tourism）：tourist attractions, economic impact, cultural exchange, environmental footprint, sustainable tourism

6、犯罪与法律（Crime and Law）

犯罪预防（Crime Prevention）：community policing, rehabilitation, education programs, deterrence, social inequality

青少年犯罪（Youth Crime）：juvenile delinquency, peer pressure, family influence, early intervention, education reform

网络犯罪（Cybercrime）：cybersecurity, hacking, identity theft, digital fraud, privacy protection

7、工作与生活（Work and Life）

工作与生活平衡（Work-Life Balance）：flexible working hours, remote work, stress management, job satisfaction, burnout

职业发展（Career Development）：professional growth, skill acquisition, networking, lifelong learning, career planning

失业与就业（Unemployment and Employment）：job market, economic recession, skill mismatch, government intervention, job training

8、政府责任（Government Responsibility）

社会福利（Social Welfare）：universal healthcare, unemployment benefits, affordable housing, income support, elderly care

教育投入（Education Investment）：public education, scholarship programs, infrastructure improvement, teacher training, curriculum reform

环境保护政策（Environmental Policies）：carbon tax, renewable energy subsidies, deforestation prevention, pollution control, waste management

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